Graphics Critique Group

[thulfiqaar]

No thanks I need a lot more practice before I share my drawings lol plus I need a place to draw first. Inshallah in June I will have a new desk and my own room

[aLeeNa_xD]

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doodled this while thulfiqaar and gengis were 'arguing' about who's the more passionate gamer (: lol

[thulfiqaar]

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doodled this while thulfiqaar and gengis were 'arguing' about who's the more passionate gamer (: lol

I feel very intimidated by your amazing drawing skills mashallah, I feel like I should just give up on doing anything with graphics. You have an amazing talent wallah.

[Kreax]

Agreed with fiqh. Except that it motivates me and shows how much I still need to learn.

[ashes999]

Aleena_XD I would consider making my own gallery thread, or DevaintArt account. MashaAllah tabarakallah, awesome.

Likes:
- Blue colour scheme
- Waves in the background
- General composition

Opportunities:
- Maybe more colour contrast from foreground and background elements

[aLeeNa_xD]

I can't really change anything to that doodle since it was in the iscribble board. Ashes you should totally join the board with me sometime and draw!

I just did a series of ink drawings, I'll post them soon. But yeah. Maybe I'll make a thread for my stuff on here lol. Deviantart is so picky and time consuming when it comes to uploading one piece of art work -_- I have an account there it just never gets updated as frequently as tumblr/Facebook lol

[gengis]

mashAllah aleena, I love your style! Now go make us a logo together with saqib!! :)

[thulfiqaar]

mashAllah aleena, I love your style! Now go make us a logo together with saqib!! :)

THIS!

[gengis]

mashAllah aleena, I love your style! Now go make us a logo together with saqib!! :)

[Kreax]

I promised Ashes999 that I would post this.

The blood on the wall says "Get Out," I don't think it's very clear, but meh... Also the characters were drawn in a rayman-like way, in that they don't have arms or legs, but they do have hands and feet.

I made my first attempt at pixel art after playing dead space a while back... sorry for the morbidness >.>

AWWWWRRIGGGHT!!!! LEMME HAVE IT!

[ashes999]

You asked for it :)

- Blood on the wall is good
- Severed body parts is good
- Character is recognizable as such
- Good job on the eyes + gun + lighting

I actually "like" it. I mean, it does what it's supposed to do.

[Kreax]

jazakAllahu khayr ashes999,

Is there anything I could've done better? Any opportunities I should look out for?

I'm not a fan of over the top blood/gore/whatever. This was moreso making fun of how obvious the game was at trying to scare the player. Mr. Choppy, was a silly way that one of my favorite LPers used to refer to the monsters in dead space.

[ashes999]

I see no real opportunities, except COLOUR (which you are severely lacking -- it creates a good mood though). You could have coloured the boots, head, etc. but this gives it that surreal feeling of two colours. Ditto for the background.

[Maaysi]

I managed to doodle this in class.... Its probably my best doodle, but as you can tell i am not very good at drawing.

its a swan origami style, dont ask why or how i drew it :S

[ashes999]

Love the shading.