***UPDATED V2*** The End Times Poster

[saqib7]

***Updated*** Just finished the poster




Her is a poster I have Started But don't Know how to finish.

the colours here look a bit too saturated but on print they will be lighter

[aLeeNa_xD]

whats the poster for? give us some background on it

it looks pretty sweet though, loving the image in text.
i think the fireball should maybe either be higher so you can see the word more or maybe flying off the right side with the text burnt like paper?

/shrug
looks awesome anyway (:

[saqib7]

its for an Islamic event called 'the end times'

[aLeeNa_xD]

ah. looks good still!
is there going to be more text? i'd like to see this when you're done with it.
i wish i was good with photographic elements in posters.
so far with my posters i've been sticking to vector art in illustrator

[AhmadSA]

I agree with Aleena, move the fireball.
Looking forward to the real thing

[thulfiqaar]

You guys are way more experienced then I am lol so I have nothing good to add but to say *points at aLeeNa_xD* What she said

[Kreax]

I would have the fire ball circle around the title to the S, leaving a flame trail that fades out near the top left corner. For balance, I would add something just under the 'T' in times.

The rest of the space should contain event details that look similar to a movie poster.

I'm guessing the theme of the event is al-Akhirah. If so, here's a good movie poster for concept reference.



The concept of the end is illustrated by the destruction of the earth, the composition is very well balanced, and fits sort of the same feel that I think you are going for.

The text at the bottom is hard to read, I suggest if you go with that style, make sure it is easily readable. You wouldn't want anyone to get lost or show up at the wrong time, lol.

How did you make the flame?

[aLeeNa_xD]

i wanna know how he made the flame as well! lol.
did you just modify a stock image? its pretty hawt. (har har. puns)

[saqib7]

it's a modified stock image.

[aLeeNa_xD]

okay so i might be a little picky here BUT thats what critiques are all about, right?!

the hierarchy of info is kinda off, like I'd make the date and time a little bigger since thats really important. it should be bigger than the masjid it self.

also i dont know about the colors you chose for the text.. but it looks awesome! mA.

[saqib7]

Thanks aleenaxd, I just read through it and it's says 'after asr maghrib'. Lol

[saqib7]

The colors seem to get saturated when I uploud it. I don't get it

[aLeeNa_xD]

what are you using to make these?
plus if the output is CMYK, that might be the issue here lol.

[gengis]

mashAllah saqib, that looks really cool! Is there live streaming from the event?

[saqib7]

No live streaming but thulfiqaar live near the event